Friday, February 24, 2012
Show, DON'T Tell
I woke up laying on the ground, head in a rush. I saw two men walking away from me with my shoes in their hands. I looked at the one guys face, he was a dark man, black stringy hair and black eyes. His clothes made him look like a janitor or did some sort of dirty work. He wore a fire red hat. Three weeks later I see me shoes, moving across the side-walk. I saw the person wearing them and I new he was the one that ruined my perfect run. The pure look of his face made an anger burn deep in my soul. I felt a hate for this man I could never think of feeling. I decided to intercept him, but he recognized me before I could get close enough. I ran to him as fast as possible, tripped him and pulled the shoes off his feet. My life was complete again.
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thats a good one. very comical but i liked it.
ReplyDeleteSounded pretty good :P Could use more explanation however O: Like, why did the dude steal your shoes?!
ReplyDeleteI really like it, because you want to know why that happened and what's about this man,so you want to read more about it.
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